But just for kicks, I decided to read the critique and WOW I'm annoyed. This chick marked my paper up like it was Christmas, putting random ass parentheses where they DON'T belong...and then on the second page she spews some BS about how I need more examples. And she mispelled hierarchy. I mean I know it's not that much of a biggie but don't critique my paper and tell me I need this and that when it's a rough draft and I KNOW what I need to do. And if you're going to critique me, maybe run a spell check. Mmkay thanks.
So I'm revising a paper that's due this week. We have to turn in a rough draft, critique our classmate's rough drafts and then turn in the final at the end. Not to toot my own horn but I can write the hell out of a paper if it's something I'm passionate about. And the class is Social Theory which is the one class that's been keeping me sane all semester. So, I really didn't bother reading my classmate's responses to my papers because if their work is any indication of their suggestions, it's craptastic. The first paper I critiqued floored me because it was a hot mess of spelling/grammatical/common sense errors.